Writing Task1 模板不在于多,而在于精 - Bar Chart

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雅思写作总共1小时，时间分配是Task1 20mins / give info about / 从抽象到具体+从整体到部分

学术类雅思小作文Task1：通过改写题目写好Introduction段落 - 1. 替换动词 & 句式 2. 概括变具体
Overview - "Overall, On the whole. 1. include comparison 2). 2~3 key features 3. no specific data)"
Details paragraph 1 - specific data to support comparisons
Details paragraph 2 - specific data to support comparisons

KMF练习>备考指南>雅思写作必备素材积累

Task1：

△ 柱状为王，线表饼以及非数据考题辅助进攻；
△ 动态图仍是考试重点，静态图和非数据考题辅助备考
△ 考生必须灵活掌握动态图四大句式的变化，掌握动态柱图、饼图、表格转化为线图的方式，随后按照趋势（上升下降）的总变化情况，对数据进行分类分批的描述；

1. Introduction 2. Overview 3. Details paragraph1 4. Details paragraph2

IELTS Practice Materials

The bar chart below shows the number of research students studying a different subject in 2005.

summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

1. Introduction 2. Overview 3. Details paragraph1 4. Details paragraph2

1. Introduction [替换动词/句式]

原文: The bar chart below shows the number of research students studying a different subject in 2005.

改写: The bar chart presents the number of research students, divided by gender (概括变具体), who pursued(致力于/从事) different subjects in 2005. These subjects included linguistics, psychology, natural sciences, engineering, programming and mathematics. (概括变具体)

pursued (替换上文 studying): 追求; 致力于 ; 执行 ; 贯彻 ; 继续探讨 ; 1. 替换动词/句式 2. 概括变具体

2. Overview [compar/nodata]

include comparison
2~3 key features
no specific data

Overall, there were more male than female research students in the given year. Among all the subjects, male students had a higher enrollment than female students except for linguistics. Although both genders took a strong interest in psychology and natural sciences, two of the most popular subjects, men least preferred linguistics and women mathematics. (高级的写法：句式相同省动词)

先从大体粗犷的角度写出来

由总到分 2. 由粗到细 3. 但是绝对不可以提数字

1. Introduction 2. Overview 3. Details paragraph1 4. Details paragraph2

3. body paragraph 1

Female and male students showed a more or less similar interest in linguistics, psychology and natural sciences. In particular(连接词), natural sciences was the most popular of all, showing the same enrollment number of 200. Though very popular, psychology was favored more by men(200) than women(around 170). In linguistics, the situation was the reverse, with more women than men.

善用括号: Task1

1. Introduction 2. Overview 3. Details paragraph1 4. Details paragraph2

4. body paragraph 2

However(转折,上面说的是相同点), female and male students showed significant differences in engineering, programming and mathematics. In all three subjects, male dominance was obvious, especially(重要词汇) in mathematics, which was taken 200 male students and only around 40 female students. In engineering and programming, the number of female students was roughly half of that of male.