Shoppping, Env, Jobs
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Online shopping is becoming more common these days. What effect could this have on the environment and the types of jobs required?
1. Introduction
harmful to the environment but benefits the job market
It is true that online shopping has become more and more popular in our time. In my opinion, while this trend is not eco-friendly, it helps to create new job opportunities.
It is true that…has become more and more popular in our time
疑问: it helps to create new job opportunities. 不缺少代词么?
2. Body 1 - harmful to the env
online shopping is harmful to the environment
On the one hand, e-shopping has a negative influence on the environment. Unlike in-store shopping, in which customers make purchases after trying and checking the products, online consumers shop in front of the screen. With a few mouse clicks, their orders are easily placed based on the pictures, descriptions and comments provided on the website.
However, misleading as these information can be, the commodities=goods received do not always meet the expectations of the buyers. To make the clients content, the convenient exchange and return procedure is then initiated, which requires extra packages to be consumed and more truck trips to be made to pick up the products. This increases not only the amount of waste but also the emission of the hazardous substance in the air. Thus, online shopping can be harmful to the environment.
Unlike in-store shopping, in which customers make purchases after trying and checking the products, online consumers shop in front of the screen.
commodity = commod(方便) + ity， initiate initiated = in + it + iate
hazardous substance
3. Body paragraph 2
online shopping benefits the job market
4. Conclusion
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